Words matter. What are yours?

Words matter. 
People connect with a brand when it demonstrates empathy and offers a solution that meets their lifestyle. Brands use words and visuals to communicate. My crude stick figures preclude me from preaching about visuals! My love for and experience writing does enable me to provide tips for effective written communication :).

Before I share fun examples of savvy marketing messages, here are tips to create effective messaging:

1. Write for a specific target audience.
2. Talk as if you’re a person, not a company or organization.
3. Use your customers’ words, not yours.
4. Use a consistent brand voice.
5. Cut extra words.

Words matter when it comes to packaging.
How can you differentiate your product on the shelf in a retail store? Use words on the package that speak to your audience’s pain and encourage trial. Nivea scores big with their call-out “Try 48-hour moisture”.

nivea

Words matter when it comes to subject lines.
Here are tips to write effective subject lines:

  1. Keep it brief.
  2. Offer value.
  3. Create urgency.
  4. Include keywords.
  5. Write conversationally.
  6. Encourage action.
  7. Include you or your.

And here are smartly crafted subject lines:

  • How to live at home (Sender: Feather)
  • A Sneak Peak for VIPs Only (Sender: Serena & Lily)
  • Rock the color of the year (Sender: Etsy)
  • Uh-oh, your prescription is expiring (Sender: Warby Parker)
  • Here’s the discount you wanted (Sender: LAMODA)
  • 3 ways to improve your pins (Sender: Pinterest)

Words matter when it comes to taglines.
What makes a great tagline?

  1. ​Words that are memorable.
  2. Words that include a key benefit.
  3. Words that help differentiate the brand.
  4. Words that convey positive feelings about the brand.
diamond

Some of my favorite taglines are:

  • De Beers: A diamond is forever.
  • Capital One: What’s in your wallet?
  • Kellogg’s Rice Krispies: Snap! Crackle! Pop!
  • Kentucky Fried Chicken: Finger lickin’ good.
  • Wheaties: Breakfast of champions.
  • L’Oréal: Because you’re worth it.

Words matter when it comes to communicating bad news.
When it comes to sharing bad news with customers, Chewy is the leader of the pack. The direct-to-consumer seller of pet food and supplies has built a loyal customer base that values the company’s commitment to their pets’ health. While its competition is fierce, including Amazon, e-commerce pet supply companies, and big box stores, Chewy has dominated the online sector.

Its brand is all about being approachable and an ally for pet lovers. Here’s one of their well-written customer emails:

chewy 2

Need help finding your words? 

Connect with me at laura@vivalabrand.com

 

Author:
Laura Sheridan
About:
Laura Sheridan, Founder & President of Viva La Brand has a proven track record of effective branding and advertising, spanning over twenty five years with some of the best in the business: Foote, Cone & Belding in Chicago; Hill, Holliday and Polaroid in Boston; and, Progressive Insurance and Viva La Brand in Cleveland. Laura founded Viva La Brand to offer large and small organizations alike strategic marketing expertise to catapult their visibility, growth and profitability. Viva La Brand develops effective brand strategies and conducts ad agency searches that successfully match clients with the optimal ad agency partners. Laura is proud to work with smart, innovative leader Brands in a wide range of industries from health care to manufacturing to technology and financial services. In addition to her work with clients, Laura is an author and speaker on all topics related to Brand.
More articles by: Laura Sheridan
Sign-up to receive Viva’s Blog Click Here